Feedback from 1st Treatment

We were told that the original idea for our music video was good but it was a bit too complex. They didn’t like how that as well as the skating that we were also putting other parts into the scene while it was going on i.e. the troubles he would have to face in life. We were told that there was too many or that some of the problems would make it confusing to watch. Also we were told that the locations for our video was good so I don’t think we would actually have to change that much about the video but maybe rethink the troubles he will face, maybe a questionnaire or something along those lines will need to be done so we can properly represent the troubles of the average teenager.